Last Words

I was not with my mother when she died. No one was. She slipped away from this world during the night, leaving on her own terms, unaccountable into eternity.

I don’t think she passed away in her sleep; I’m not sure it’s even possible to cross the cosmic threshold with no awareness. In any case, I know she would have wanted to be there, eyes wide open. She always said she was more curious about death than afraid. Which impressed me.

I wish there had been more warning, time enough to get on a plane. My sister reported that my mother was seeing and talking to people who were not there, behavior we interpreted as confusion caused by her poor circulation. In fact, she was actively dying, moving farther and farther away from us as she journeyed on alone.

No one had told us that the dying often see what the rest of don’t, will speak to these phantoms in a manner so earnest we begin to doubt our own senses. Is heaven real, has a corner lifted? Or do the minds of our loved ones, unmoored from the task of living, fall back to the beginning? It must be boundless, that realm, a place of infinite odds, free of time and fact and meaning.

What we wanted, my sisters and I, was a tender farewell, a few moments of clarity culminating in the absolution of mercy. Isn’t that what we all want at this point, a last swipe at honesty? 

Rarely do these Hallmark moments arrive. Sometimes death is swifter than anticipated. Sometimes we are denied access, for any number of sad reasons. There are those who take their grudges with them as if, at the end of life, there might be a prize for bitterness.

Often the dying will drift into a comatose state, unable to see or speak. They may still be able to hear, but what they understand is anyone’s guess. Essentially, they are walled off, immune to our needs. My partner’s mother, May, died in this manner, leaving me shortchanged, stranded, unable to plead my case. I will never know why she didn’t like me—not that I would have asked, not that she would have told me. There was no way to access May’s inner workings. She shunned any real conversation, refused to spill a drop of herself.

Sometimes the last words we hear from someone are careless, unfortunate. A friend of mine was engaged in a minor family squabble in her mother’s hospital room. Annoyed, her mother muttered, “Shut up, Donna,” before falling silent herself, forever. Donna told me it felt like being given a sharp-edged stone she couldn’t put down.

The words we most long for at the end are among the most hackneyed and abused. Surprisingly, “I love you” and “I’m sorry” still hold their value and work like magic. Hearing them restores and empowers us, wipes the slate clean.

I never heard my mother apologize for anything, and I don’t believe she would have broken with tradition on her deathbed. She held her four children at arm’s length, as if intimacy was a gamble not worth taking. “Cope,” she’d say when we came to her with our problems, a response that became her signature. We laugh about it now, my sisters and I, tossing the word around like a ball. 

She was funny, resourceful, unquestionably smart. She decorated for the holidays, painted Easter eggs, put underwear on the dog for amusement. She sewed like mad, ironed our clothes, made the best boxed lunches ever. The fun leached out of her when we grew into adolescents—perhaps we reminded her of her lost youth—but back then she fulfilled her duty. There was only one rule she ignored: she did not keep us safe.

It is difficult for me to believe that my mother didn’t know what my father was up to, at night in our rooms. He was that reckless, that lawless. And cruel too, in ways too hideous to relate. I shed him when I was 15, molted everything but the damage and moved on, even changed my last name for good measure. He died a few years ago, news that made no difference to me. I did wonder what I would have felt had I felt anything at all. That’s how good I was at erasing him from the life he left me with.

Last time I saw him was in a store, over 50 years ago. I was searching through blouses and there he was, dangerously close, his face a sudden, chilling fact. We said whatever we said and then I got away, something I couldn’t do when I was a child, when wonder and terror were my only options: one moment gaping at clouds, the next hiding in the woods. From behind the trees I could see our house, knew he was in there, prowling. I used to wish I had seen him before he died and told him what a waste of life he was. But you can’t wound a sociopath, so I guess it doesn’t matter that I never got my say.

Frankly, I can’t see any point in fathers, and what’s a mother love if it doesn’t have teeth? Fathers, mothers, children—maybe we’re all expecting too much and failing under the pressure. Are we ever what the other had in mind? Maybe we should go back to living in tribes and avoid these unhealthy bonds.

My mother wasn’t big on hugs. She had no interest in her grandchildren. She wasn’t concerned about Roe v Wade being overturned because she was past the age of fertility. Still, when I saw a little old woman yesterday bent over her shopping cart, peering through thick glasses, her short hair flattened to her skull, her thin legs in navy blue sweatpants, the pain took my breath away.

Recently, I found a photo of her I had forgotten. She was smiling at someone, or something, the answer to that question glinting off her glasses. I thought I knew her face and all its guises, but this was a smile I had never seen. There was her youth in it, and a weary sort of contentment, as if her battles were behind her, or so she believed. It was a smile that knew nothing of the years to come, and all the things she could have done, would have done, differently. She was her own woman, not easy to know or love, but each time I look at this picture I want to warn her, to show her a path more yielding, and if that’s not love what is?

If I had reached my mother in time, if I had held her hands in mine and looked into her fading eyes, what would we have said to each other? I can’t imagine I would have asked her the question I wanted to ask all my life. Her answer would not have been reliable and what use was the truth anyway?

“I forgive you,” I might have whispered, washing the slate clean myself. But she was dying, and those were not the words I would have her carry into the hereafter. “I love you,” I would have said and left it at that.

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Jean Ryan

Jean Ryan, a native Vermonter, lives in Lillian, Alabama. Her stories and essays have appeared in a variety of journals and anthologies. She has also published a novel, LOST SISTER. Her short story collections, SURVIVAL SKILLS and LOVERS AND LONERS, are available online. STRANGE COMPANY, a collection of short nature essays, is available in paperback as well as digital and audio editions.

14 thoughts on “Last Words

  1. Breathtaking and thoughtful. You are an exquisite Writer, Jean. What a perfect work to read on this winter solstice day. Hear, hear.

      1. & Congratulations on receiving the Editor’s Choice Award for “Lichen” in the new book, WOODLANDS (d. ellis phelps, editor). My copy arrived yesterday; what a wonderful compendium of poetry, prose and photography (the photo on page 116 of the bee asleep inside the poppy is now equal to my favorite photo of bees & the hummingbird sharing a drink that headlines your website!). If there is a possibility to hear/see you read your short story, Lyme Ticks & Ladybugs, that would be my Christmas / Solstice wish! Hail Jean Ryan! XOXOXO

  2. Bella!, I think everyone would like to hear & see you read your work. I have a collection of vinyl records of everyone from cummings to frost to Dylan Thomas’ 1953 Under Milkwood…..anyway, I love seeing favorite Writers & Poets read their work for posterity. If I lived in Alabama I’d set up studio time to have you record all of your work for the ages!

  3. So well written, as with all your stories. Having had a nurturing, loving father, I can only imagine what pain I would have felt had it been otherwise. So happy that you did get away, but so sorry your mother couldn’t cope with the truth.

  4. Beautifully written, my dear friend. My heart aches that you didn’t have the beautiful upbringing that you deserved, with a loving father and a nurturing mother. I’m happy you ran when you did, and grateful you turned out to be a beautiful, caring, and loving human despite the obstacles you had to overcome. I love you, and thank you again for sharing. ❤

  5. Jean, if a well-written story is one that can sweep the reader directly into the realm of the character, then you have succeeded far beyond your knowing. The hard reality is, in this story, the character is you, and that is a hard pill for me to swallow. It hurts. What I do know, is that through our parents’ failings, they somehow contributed to the development of what have become wonderfully compassionate, and beautiful human beings, such as yourself. I read a wonderful Buddhist quote not long ago, “The way people treat you is their karma. How we react is ours.” You, and your sisters, have made the best out of a horrid situation by becoming the most wonderful humans I have the honor of knowing. Thank you, my friend, for sharing your story.

    1. Thank you, Lyn. Your comments brought me to tears–and I don’t cry easily. I write to try and understand my feelings, to basically triumph over words. The best thing about writing personal essays is they require enough objectivity to see things clearly, which of course mitigates, even erases, the pain. I’m glad this piece resonated with you, gladder still that you’re my friend.💞

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